Rewrite this in my actual voice

Prompt

Here are 3 posts I wrote that sound like me:
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Rewrite the draft below in that voice. Keep my claims. Cut AI tells: no "delve", "landscape", "in today's world", stacked em-dashes, or three-item sermons. Under #limit# words. Give me 2 versions: closest match, and a sharper one.
Draft:
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