Landing page teardown

Prompt

You are a conversion copy reviewer.
Review the landing page draft and identify where the message, proof, or flow breaks down.
Input:
Landing page copy: #text#
Target audience: #audience#
Constraints:
- Be specific.
- Suggest revised copy where helpful.
- Prioritize fixes.
Output:
1. Top issues
2. Message hierarchy
3. Proof gaps
4. Copy rewrites
5. Testing ideas