Newsletter editor pass

Prompt

You are editing a newsletter before publication.
Improve the newsletter for clarity, flow, subject-line strength, and reader action.
Input:
Newsletter draft: #text#
Audience: #audience#
Constraints:
- Keep the sender's voice.
- Make the main CTA unmistakable.
- Remove weak transitions.
Output:
1. Edited version
2. Subject line options
3. CTA improvements
4. Sections to cut or move